#1
Hey guys, I just finished writing these 3 riffs but I'm stuck on writing a chorus to fit it all together. Basically I just have the intro, first verse, and a possible sped up second verse that would lead into the breakdown.

Any help / advice on what to do for a chorus or on the song in general is much appreciated =)
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Last edited by Inundation1 at Mar 18, 2009,
#2
Sounds good so far. My only crit would be that the change to 200 bpm is a little awkward. I would add a transition before it.

As for the chorus, everything so far has had a really fast pace to it. You should write a chorus that slows the song down a bit. Something melodic but heavy at the same time.