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I just grabbed my acoustic and strummed, some words came to my head so I wrote them down. Im suprised by my results. I've written songs before but this feels like the first real "song" I ever wrote.

Any comments, ideas, or anything? Thanks.

Name
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My tricycle is getting small
Baby sis has no new dolls
And jesus is on my chain
Funny how the most troubled kind
Of person that you will find
Is only there for an hour

And how do you feel inside
A little soft with pride
And put aside once again

I think its great to find
You go away when I close my eyes
Just forever, nothing less

I used to have a name
Its been forever since then
But now I feel much taller
You criticize nothing big
Im not special I haven't been
Think that its time for change

I think its great to find
You go away when I close my eyes
Just for forever, nothing less