#1
There's a feeling
That I can't miss
But its hard to put in words

Funny
that ive never
spared a thought

About
all this
but its obvious

pre chorus-
Why does it hurt so much to know, youre not mine?(and youll never be)
ive really gotta know, for sure

Chorus-
So tell me is this love (love)
that makes me think of you?
when im down and im feeling blue
is there a cure, does it even matter anymore
if i do
do i love you?
#2
My first post...go ahead...rip it apart

btw did u know how many words rhyme with 'you' including 'capital of peru' and 'analytical review'!
#3
the style of the verses is a little choppy, but it could work.
Pop-punk came to mind

as far as a simplistic song about 'the one that got away', this doesnt need a whole lotta work, except ide suggest re-wording the chorus. thats easily the weakest portion

Crit for Crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1089380

~b