#1
I've never met you before
and i'll never plan on it either
i saw myself walking in your sneakers.
in my shoes, these loafers.
too much of my world is already over.
you feel the same way too.

stick with your guns
even when the day has already come
you should never ask me for a favor
cause all in all we are similar strangers
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What a talented person.
#2
this didnt really do it for me
i didnt seem to go anywhere and felt choppy

however
"too much of my world is already over.
you feel the same way too."
was quite a nice couplet, and if you could get the rest of it to that same quality, this would be quite good

C4C in my sig if you'd like
~b
#3
It just seemed...empty. It had no substance, and i was done reading before i realized i had even started. I had to TRY to read it.

Even though, i liked the flow of the last stanza. It seemed like it would make an alright chorus.

C4C-What Horror
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