hey guys....here is one that i was working on tonight... any feedback is greatly appreciated

Guiding Light
V1: Open your eyes
Look around the desolate fields of gilded graves
You’ve behaved your whole existence
Living life but always with assistance
Fighting only with passive resistance
When will you take control
Stop living life as if your on parole

Chorus: Use your might
Its time to rise
Into the sky
Fly away from it all
Follow that guiding light

V2: Drowning in expectations
The temptations to great to stop the fight
Labeled a disappointment, where is the light
You must realize this is not your burial site
The world is bright, hope is your life line
You know what to do to make it to cloud nine
Just Simply open your eyes

Chorus again