#1
I wrote this after i found an old letter in my shorts from my ex, so yeah


[verse]
when we're apart
All I think about are all the things I wanna say
When we're together
Talking is not an option

The more I'm away from you
The more I want you here
The more without your love
The more I won't your near
I know it makes no sense
To want what's not around

[Pre-Chorus]
But there's just one true love for me
And that's the one i found
We've gone threw it all
The sunshine and the rain
But I would take a sea of storms
To be with you again

[Chorus]
I don't wanna lose you now
That I've found my true love
You're the reason why I smile
And when you're not around
My smile turns to a frown
And when you come around
My smile comes back around
I'm Just happy that you're here

[Verse]
Sometimes I cry the tears of joy, not fear
Every time I see you, my heart starts to beat
You've got me going in circles, around
Around your finger, I'm wrapped

[Pre-Chorus]
But there's just one true love for me
And that's the one i found
We've gone threw it all
The sunshine and the rain
But I would take a sea of storms
To be with you again

[Chorus]
I don't wanna lose you now
That I've found my true love
You're the reason why I smile
And when you're not around
My smile turns to a frown
And when you come around
My smile comes back around
I'm Just happy that you're here

[Interlude]
So get this clear
You've met you match
And how is that?
All the while feeling high
Keep me here, Keep me near
Then I bet my smile will reappear
It will will reappear

[Chorus]
I don't wanna lose you now
That I've found my true love
You're the reason why I smile
And when you're not around
My smile turns to a frown
And when you come around
My smile comes back around
I'm Just happy that you're here
I don't wanna lose you now
That I've found my true love
You're the reason why I smile
And when you're not around
My smile turns to a frown
And when you come around
My smile comes back around
I'm Just happy that you're here

[Ending]
I'm just so happy that you're here
So happy that you're here
I'm just so happy that you're here
So happy that you're here
I'm just so happy that you're here
So happy that you're here
I'm just so happy that you're here
So happy that you're here
#2
Quote by guitar_loser

The more without your love
The more I won't your near you mean want right??
I know it makes no sense
To want what's not around It make perfect sense to want what you can't have it's practically written in our DNA to want what we don't have
...
We've gone threw it all
The sunshine and the rain
But I would take a sea of storms
To be with you again
...
And when you're not around What kind of rhyme scheme is that?? Seriously??
My smile turns to a frown
And when you come around
My smile comes back around
I'm Just happy that you're here I can't bring myself to read the rest.

Are you serious??

First off subject matter is boring as hell. I got through (or "threw" as you spell it) the first
three stanzas and then I threw up (or is that through up ). Give me an original point of view on a tired subject matter or next time you find a note from your ex in your pocket spare us all the agony and just burn it. Then go out and find some dirty cougar twice your age, bang her senseless then come back and write a song for us about that!!

Also next time please try to focus on spelling and grammar.

Sorry to be harsh but do you post on the internet to boost your self esteem or do you post for honesty - however cold it may seem. Cause dude I'll give it to you straight the way I see it. (Whatever that is worth )

Keep going man if you have the desire the rest will come, but this isn't it.

Feel free to return fire: Walk Away (link to my lyrics)
Si
Last edited by 20Tigers at Mar 19, 2009,