Because this forum is full of metal heads and you're unlikely to get many crits, I'll do it.

Playing is pretty solid. It's a great song, but really needs to be played on an acoustic I think. Although, you have made it sound very nice. Don't worry about the order it sounds great good job.
Quote by sashki
A lot of pros do that: if they play a wrong note, they'll hit it again to make it look as if it's intentional. It's called "jazz", aparently.
First off major kudos for having the balls to do a TE song! And it sounds great and will only get better with time, keep at it!