hey man thanks for checking out my song. Your song has a very interesting melody, I like it. There are a few interesting accidentals and stuff that keep it very original. The lead solo is simple and very to the point — it fits in well, I really like simple melodic solos in some songs and this song definitely fits it. Your voice could use a little work in some places, but the harmony in the chorus is cool. It's not that the voice itself is bad, it's that there are a few strained and missed notes. Just an accuracy thing. Anyways, its definitely an interesting melody and pattern. It's cool, I like it. Good job man