#1
This is prolly very boring but oh well check it out
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
its just a very simple acoustic thing. it needs vocals really bad. I just need to know if its good enough to put some vocals to.
My Music
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GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
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Last edited by TeXaS_db at Mar 19, 2009,
#2
That was really nice, actually. You had some great tone and it was a very nice emotional atmosphere. It actually had similar qualities to Andy McKee, which is pretty awsome in and of itself. Vocals would really add to this song a lot and make it a little bit more varied. Good job though, overall.
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#3
Thanks, I wrote that song on my uncles old guitar the night after he died. There were also alot of dramatic changes in my life that i was going through at that time that didn't really help, so i guess it was kinda written in an emotional atmosphere lol. Thanks for the crit.
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
Last edited by TeXaS_db at Mar 21, 2009,
#4
Beautiful playing there and well written, the emotion is just pouring from every note you play. Nothing to crit here at all. The song just left me with a great feeling. Woah! then "Just a little" frightened the **** out of me. lol

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1090909
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#5
hey man cheers for the crit, late replya s ive been out all weekend, had alisten to your tune,sounds great, very nice, will be even better with vocs. good work.
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#6
I always like listening to your stuff Texas. I can always expect good tone, and good song construction.

Lovely melody and accompaniment style acoustic playing, but I felt it need something a little more. You have a winner here, so develop it! Maybe a modulation to the relative minor, would really add to the emotion that the piece posseses. Some string accompaniment in the background? A climaxical section? Only you can develop this in the way you like, I'm just throwing ideas out there. I'm gonna say 8/10, great start, but needs more IMO.



If you have time:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1091742
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