#1
This is more of an upbeat song about going out to a party and seeing some girl you've always had a crush on kinda deal. it might be hard to get the beat down right away, but it's there if you work on it lol

here it is,
crit for crit

VERESE:

in all my life
i have never seen
such a crush, such a lush
such a beautiful scene

i put my drink down
and i move through the crowd
knees weak, hands shaking
but my eyes are set on you

PRE-CHORUS:

woah woah oh this is my last shot at you
woah woah oh i've gotta pull this one through
woah woah oh this is my time i know
i'm gonna get you or go home alone

CHORUS:

i wont wait anymore
i'm gonna head out to the floor
i wanna get you all alone
i'm gonna show you a world that you've never seen before

(the first three lines of the chorus are two measures each, so the words are kinda dragged out, which makes the last line, which is considerably longer, fit with the beat)

VERSE 2:

i see all the guys
how they're all over you
at the flick of your wrist
they'll do whatever you want 'em to

but i just
i just wanna take you home
i wanna take your hand
and call you my own

PRE CHORUS

CHORUS

BRIDGE:

sing the chorus but with each line have background vocals singing "you are my crush" and "you are my lush" so it'll be like this:

i wont wait anymore
(you are my crush)
i'm gonna head out to the floor
(you are my lush)
i wanna get you all alone
(you are my crush)
i'm gonna show you a world that you've never seen before
(you are my crush)

during the bridge it's just gonna be a single palm muted note with a kick drum keeping beat

CHORUS (however many times to end it)

then the end =]

let me know what you think!!