#1
Kind of a jazzy/funky mid-tempo acoustic song. Still very rough as I just wrote it but would like some advice. Cheers!

'Tell It To My Face'

Well I met you on a Friday night
On a boat outside the bay
And you told me that you love me and you told me that you need me
Now you tell me that it’s gone away

Well you caved on a Tuesday night
But girl nobody understands
That I had you and I lost you and I don’t know what I’m gonna do
You’re sand running through my hands

So girl tell it to my face
Is this really worth the chase?
Will I ever get to see you cry?
‘Cause girl I’m trying and it’s true
But am I getting through to you
Will I crash before I get to fly?

And you came on a Thursday night
But girl I think you’re just a tease
Because you’re coming and you’re going and I’m always never knowing
If I’m chasing fish in empty seas

So girl tell it to my face
Is this really worth the chase?
Will I ever get to see you cry?
‘Cause girl I’m trying and it’s true
But am I getting through to you
Will I crash before I get to fly?

Girl you changed me
I used to be all mine
Girl you changed me
And now I’m aching all the time

So girl tell it to my face
Is this really worth the chase?
Will I ever get to see you cry?
‘Cause girl I’m trying and it’s true
But am I getting through to you
Will I crash before I get to fly?