#1
ok i'm one of the guitarists in my band so these are really the first lyrics i've written...tell me what you think. they're for a death metal/deathcore song. My bassist said they were scary i apologize in advance for any spelling errors

So this is how it ends
You exile me to the hauntings of your past
You associate me with those you gave misplaced trust
You've made an undeniable error
You put yourself here
The ubiquty of your apathy is bleeding through your scars
Never again speak my name, never again think of my face
Lay rotting in your own indecisivness
Offer your arms to a sweet, sickly embrace and never look back
The deciever, the betrayer, the liar, they wait for you
Salt my wounds with your echoing absence of truth
You put yourself here
The ubiquty of your apathy is bleeding through your scars
(spoken)
It died because you let it, you held what we had in your hands and you threw it away. You did this to me. You did this to our relationship. Its dead, you killed it! You slit its throat and abandoned me with its corpse with nothing left to do but drink its blood! You lied to me. You lied to me! If there is justice in the world you will reap whay you've sown.
(Screamed)
You will reap what you've sown
Constrain my dying desires, the parasite will leech away all you haven't taken from me
Constrain your hope, for you will never be ridden of me
I'll not let this kill me
Alone in the company of your regrets will you find peace
You put yourself here
The ubiquty of your apathy is bleeding through your scars
Your emptyness will forever be complete
Last edited by samloeffer_17 at Mar 19, 2009,
#2
lose a girlfriend much?

Anyway, good job, better than most of the **** that we hear on the radio today...kudos.