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BURN IT TO THE GROUND (Bomb the music Industry)

Hid underneath a layer of lies
Puppet on a string, monster in diguise
Traded in your soul when you signed
It's too late to leave it all behind

Look at you now your such a success
But we all know your a ****ing mess
So how do you think your gonna go
Bullet through the head or overdose?

Burn, burn, burn it to the ground
Tear, tear, tear it down
Bomb the music industry!!
Burn it to the ground

Marketing and fassion has now replaced passion
You play what they want you to play... all i can think if you have any ideas share 'em I'll give you credit this is a song about peice of **** bands like the jonas brothers taking over the music industry express your anger...
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#2
you should record this and send it to someone and try and get a record deal haha, but on a more serious note I thought it was pretty good but it needs to be longer thats just my opinion though