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mt Hebron scrolls: you could do with the intro cut in half. You're screams are good in parts but a little inconsistent. The song kinda lacks direction. The clean vocals are pretty typical hardcore vocals and they're just a little bit off, and it sounds in parts you're running out of breath and just talk the last part of the words.
Cartoon Blood Fire: You're guitar player isn't bad, but overall this song has just been heard before.
Your Beauty is Paralyzing: same as above
C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...d.php?t=1086176
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Originally posted by Marroon5MustDie
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