#1
kinda sucks. but im new at this and have no shame

so yeah, crit please. help me get better!


A broken down soul with no place to go
How can I feel so lost and out of control
It feel like the walls are closing in on me
I’m cracking to the point of insanity

I wanna go but I don’t know where to run
Pushing harder cause I’ve never felt so done
Breaking the border of my breakdown
Through my tears and distress look what I’ve found
Serenity in the catastrophe

A bright light don’t live up to it’s glory
Try to flee but it comes toward me
The radiant shine was a mere warning sign
Trains crashing right before me

I wanna go but I don’t know where to run
Pushing harder cause I’ve never felt so done
Breaking the border of my breakdown
Through my tears and distress look what I’ve found
Serenity in the catastrophe

I watch my world get torn apart
You killed my dreams and stabbed my heart
I’m suffocating but I aint quitting
The fight isn’t lost if I’m still living


I wanna go but I don’t know where to run
Pushing harder cause I’ve never felt so done
Breaking the border of my breakdown
Through my tears and distress look what I’ve found
Serenity in the catastrophe
"dear gravity, you've held me down in this starless city."