#1
Because its hard to change
what i never know
Some may come and most will go
But you don't care...
That our two hearts have turned to stone
Love has come but now its gone
And I can't keep holding on


After a late night this popped in my head and in the morning I actually remembered it so I figured I would write it down. I think it would serve as a chorus any suggestions or comments would be greatly appreciated as I'm really set on making this an entire song. I just want some opinions on what can make it the best that it can thanks UG'ers.
#2
I really like the last part of the piece written
"But you don't care...
That our two hearts have turned to stone
Love has come but now its gone
And I can't keep holding on"

I'm a little confused on the first part though....but this does have potential in my opinion