Back of my mind,
I know that you're watching me,
Try not to look,
But all i want is just to see,
If you're standing there,
Looking over my shoulder,
Why cant you let me be my self

Im too tired,
Of fighting for your affection,
I need some time,
For a bit of reflection,
And put my life,
On the path it's supposed to be,
Dont use me to fulfill your broken dreams
I liked this a lot, i agree would make a good disturbed type of song. I actually just wrote up something simliar last night...
thanks for the comments guys actually wrote this the other night when i was pretty tired so could probably do better