#2
Hey man,

Mixing's a little off. Nice guitar tone, and what I can hear of the drums is good, but they're not nearly loud enough. Anyway, some sick riffing in here, but I think it needs something else to hold my attention. Your obviously a good guitar player, but I think it needs a melody, whether you go down the vocal or instrumental route. Those little flourishes aren't really enough IMO.

7/10

If you have time:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1091742
Funk Metal
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