#1
This is about a dream I had a few nights ago, I'm still playing around with it and this is my first attempt at writing lyrics in like 2 years so any feedback is highly appreciated.

How did I get here?
I can't seem to remember,
But i'm so happy in this place,
This sublime, serene, special place
I don't want to leave

I don't care how I got here,
I just don't want to leave,
I might not find my way back

So i stay in this castle built of marble,
Glossy, glimmering, smooth and solid
It brings me a sense of security,
I could stay forever,
I don't want to leave.

I dip my feet into it's glowing pool,
The water is soothing and refreshing and cool
Then it crawls towards my knees,
Sparkling and shimmering in the moon light
I never want to leave

I focus my thoughts, my body is an illusion,
This body binding me to "reality" is just a vehicle for my soul
I focus my thoughts, this "reality" is an illusion
My mind is a vehicle for the truth
And so I concentrate

At last my feet lift off the ground,
I soar off into the air,
I can do anything,
I can create my own destiny
Hours pass and at last I want to stop
but I don't know how

I'm going too fast, I'm out of control
I'm rolling and twisting and spiraling through the sky
I just want to stop
#2
the beginning put me to sleep...in a good way haha it really sounded like a dream, i dont know how to describe it, very soothing lyrics i guess, i would say edit it a bit maybe make it flow just a bit better, but like u said ur first attempt i would say keep going with it. is there more to it, it ends kind of abruptly?
#3
Extended:


How did I get here?
I can't seem to remember,
But i'm so happy in this place,
This sublime, serene, special place
I don't want to leave

I don't care how I got here,
I just don't want to leave,
I might not find my way back

So i stay in this castle built of marble,
Glossy, glimmering, smooth and solid
It brings me a sense of security,
I could stay forever,
I don't want to leave.

I dip my feet into it's glowing pool,
The water is soothing and refreshing and cool
Then it crawls towards my knees,
Sparkling and shimmering in the moon light
I never want to leave

I focus my thoughts, my body is an illusion,
This body binding me to "reality" is just a vehicle for my soul
I focus my thoughts, this "reality" is an illusion
My mind is a vehicle for the truth
And so I concentrate

At last my feet lift off the ground,
I soar off into the air,
I can do anything,
I can create my own destiny
Hours pass and at last I want to stop
but I don't know how

I'm going too fast, I'm out of control
I'm rolling and twisting and spiraling through the sky
I just want to stop

Get me out, put me somewhere else!
Where the hell am I?!
I can't even tell!
The fog is too thick, the sky is too dark,
I'm falling too fast, everything's just a blur

Streaks of light surround me,
Glowing violet strings twist and envelop me
The light blinds me,
the violet string wraps me

And then I hit the ground,
Softly, subtly I hit the ground.
The strings and light protect me, pad me
Absorb my pain and comfort me

I roll across the moss covered ground
And finally stop near a quiet river
I lay there for a while, gasping for breath
The light melts away and forms puddles of blue,
The violet strings evaporate

I'm so alone, I'm so disoriented
I just want to leave,
I never want to come back