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#1
I DID NOT WRITE THIS. This is a poem from some kid I know, he posts them on facebook and won't consider any negative criticism because all his little bff's are riding his dick. So tell him what you think about it........


Why do we hate
We need to appreciate
We all need to love one another
Because we look like each other
Look at the person to your left and to your right
for those are the one in which we fight

I wondeer what was botherin marvin
It could have been the fact that kids are dyin
could it be the kids starvin

How can we be down for the cause
when we are the ones helpin it pause
we need to think of all the kids that died
Just because one of there parents lied

Stop having sex if your not married
Cause pretty soon your gonna have a kid to feed
Especially if your young
I know its hard, even when the devils got you sprung.
Even if they tell ya
Its ok to use a "rubba"
Having sex just doesnt effect you
IT effects your family, the community to
I dont care how hard it is
Trust me i kno, at 15 do you wanna have kids

IN the movies they say lust is beautiful
There the ones bein un truthful
BUt you wanna go and get an STD
Youll have one less friend thats me
I told you not to
You wanna mess this up do what you wanna do

To sun this up, wait till your married. I dont want you to mess up your whole life just because of one stupid decision. just wait
Don't need a gun to blow your mind.
#2
The Pit is not your personal army.


but, yes, that was pretty really horrifically bad.


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Karvid is sexy

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Why is it that some folks quote praise from other members in their sig lines?
Its lame.
Last edited by Karvid at Mar 22, 2009,
#5
I've tried over here, I've tried over there,
but I just can't bring myself to care.

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1995 American Fender Strat, EMG 85 pup
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Play what you love, love what you play
#7
Comment on it anyways, and say it sucks horse dick. Tell those girls to swallow, and remember PROTECTION KIDS .
#10
you're telling a forum full of virgins not to have sex

do you know how many 14 year olds you just pissed off
#13
You shouldn't be giving him so much crap for expressing something he believes in.

But as for the poem.....

Even if they tell ya
Its ok to use a "rubba"

lol that ain't no draaaw straaang
#15


That was horrible.
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thats about south africa tho...which isnt poor at all.
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yea venezula is just the richest country in the world...
#16
While reading the first lines, I was like "well it isn't that bad...", but after those ...

#17

'Marvin'?

EDIT:
'Even when the devils got you sprug'
Can someone explain that to me?
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#18
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'Marvin'?

Marvin Gaye
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Oh wow this is a guitar forum!
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Karvid is sexy

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Why is it that some folks quote praise from other members in their sig lines?
Its lame.
#19
My god that was horrible, he should at least learn how to spell before trying to write poems. At least.
#22
Rubba


Made by 'The Sloganizer' ----> «The Pit - be prepared.»

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"Billy eat your broccolli!"

"Screw you mom!" *raises arms*

PHEAR MA TURRETS!!
#24
I wanna impregnate an underage girl right now.
Journalism is just a gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim right, that's all you need. Aim it right, and you can blow a kneecap off the world.
Last edited by axeslash at Mar 22, 2009,
#25
Heres a poem of my own,
And I'm sure it'll pwn,
Yes I use pwn in my lyrics,
my sonnets, ballads, and limmericks.

Let everyone do as they please
on all fours or with her on her knees
I know its not my place to judge
but naive preachers suck fudge

And I don't mean the chocolatey treat
I'm talking about the shizt you don't eat
How dare you declare its fair to criticize
when people out there are just living their lives

What the hell does sex have to do with starvin'
and why do I care about some guy named marvin?
Save your words for when you have wisdom,
Get some pearls before you give 'em.

So before you decide to preach and teach,
Stick to shizt thats in your reach.
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You're a f*cking wanker.

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@Prole... Magnificent...

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Thanks sir. Unbanned.
Last edited by Prole at Mar 22, 2009,
#26
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And you just told a forum full of virgins you can't read.. Do you know how many 34 year olds you just pissed off?


Please, please, please comment on the note, TS haha. AND POST REPLIES YOU GET!


...Rubba..


Haha way ahead of you. I'll post the responses in a sec.

edit: the responses aren't that funny because its basically just his friends saying how good it is and then me and my friend having our own discussion about how bad it is. and then he comments once and says something like "whatever, i know you guys couldn't write anything this good, your hating cant affect me." and then i posted a link to this thread.
Don't need a gun to blow your mind.
Last edited by muppet master at Mar 22, 2009,
#27
Quote by Prole
Heres a poem of my own,
And I'm sure it'll pwn,
Yes I use pwn in my lyrics,
my sonnets, ballads, and limmericks.

Let everyone do as they please
on all fours or with her on her knees
I know its not my place to judge
but naive preachers suck fudge

And I don't mean the chocolatey treat
I'm talking about the shizt you don't eat
How dare you declare its fair to criticize
when people out there are just living their lives

What the hell does sex have to do with starvin'
and why do I care about some guy named marvin?
Save your words for when you have wisdom,
Get some pearls before you give 'em.

So before you decide to preach and teach,
Stick to shizt thats in your reach.

#28
Thanks gents- Sigged x2
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You're a f*cking wanker.

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@Prole... Magnificent...

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Thanks sir. Unbanned.
#30
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Really who the **** is marvin?


i know a black man named marvin.

we call him 'the mystic one'
The best thing about life is knowing you put it together
#31
...my God.
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I took a pic of myself, cut a hole in the face and stuck my knob through so i could see what I'd look like if I got bitten by a radioactive elephant.
#32
Quote by halfback_712
You shouldn't be giving him so much crap for expressing something he believes in.

But as for the poem.....

Even if they tell ya
Its ok to use a "rubba"

lol that ain't no draaaw straaang


sigged
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When I wear it I have to fight off women with a stick. Ifyouknowwhatimean.

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They're eating her! And then they're going to eat me!
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
#34
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if this guy is keepin you down
go out and sodomize a clown
Awesome.
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I took a pic of myself, cut a hole in the face and stuck my knob through so i could see what I'd look like if I got bitten by a radioactive elephant.
#36
Quote by Prole
Heres a poem of my own,
And I'm sure it'll pwn,
Yes I use pwn in my lyrics,
my sonnets, ballads, and limmericks.

Let everyone do as they please
on all fours or with her on her knees
I know its not my place to judge
but naive preachers suck fudge

And I don't mean the chocolatey treat
I'm talking about the shizt you don't eat
How dare you declare its fair to criticize
when people out there are just living their lives

What the hell does sex have to do with starvin'
and why do I care about some guy named marvin?
Save your words for when you have wisdom,
Get some pearls before you give 'em.

So before you decide to preach and teach,
Stick to shizt thats in your reach.


omg prole!

you win
#38
Quote by halfback_712
You shouldn't be giving him so much crap for expressing something he believes in.

But as for the poem.....

Even if they tell ya
Its ok to use a "rubba"

lol [bold]that ain't no draaaw straaang[/bold]



Oh Damn!!! + ∞
#39
I was having sex as I read that poem.

Sex with my hand
BOOM-SHAKALAKALAKA-BOOM-SHAKALAKUNGA
#40
I stopped reading it when it got to "Stop having sex if your not married
Cause pretty soon your gonna have a kid to feed".
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