#1
This is a song I made a while back it old school Black/Death/Thrash in the vein of old Celtic Frost, Possessed, and Mayhem. I did everything myself.

The song is called King of 1,000 Terrors and the lyrics can be found in the file.

I will return any constructive criticism I receive on this piece.

Thanks in Advance.
Attachments:
King of 1,000 Terrors.gp5
King of 1,000 Terrors.gp4
I realized I was god when I prayed and saw that I was talking to myself.
#2
Pretty damn good.

To be honest, when i looked at it and noticed it was pretty much all trem picking...well, i wasn't happy. You did well though. The melodies were really good.

The drumming was pretty good throughout, apart from the pattern you used in the chorus, with the snare on every 2nd 32nd note.

Solo was good, kinda reminded me of Nile, although more melodic.

If i heard this piece recorded with a singer, i'm sure i'd enjoy it a lot more, but as it stands it's a pretty solid piece.

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Last edited by Butt Rayge at Mar 23, 2009,
#3
Hey, great piece you have here. First of all, I think that vocals would fit over this extremely well, so hopefully you can record it. Another thing is, the solo was really good, it was very melodic. I enjoyed that. All the different time signatures in the solo end up in 4/4 though. Anyway, I really like what you did here and I think that it would be a really good metal piece when recorded. Oh and just one more thing, I think the drums could be a little spiced up. Maybe do a few fills or just change it up a bit throughout the song. Other than that really good.

9/10

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