#1
Style :Think a cross between The Gaslight Anthem and The Strokes. If you dont know the gaslight, look them up, very good band worth listening to. Crit 4 Crit


Do you ever wonder,
what comes next?
I've layed awake in my bed,
concerning my thoughts with the same thing.
Did you lead a good life,
have you done the right things?
If you have your friends to see you off,
I guess your somewhere near the right page.

(Chorus)
Momma please don't cry,
everything will be alright.
Just please don't ask me why,
the good ones always die.
And in the sky,
the angels will take her to the light,
she will wake up in a better place to night.

I'll wonder what is it's like,
to hurt so much,
you can't even open your eyes.
How do you say good bye,
when you should be having the time of your life?
And what will you say,
when your looking the good lord dead in the face?

(Chorus)
Momma please don't cry,
everything will be alright.
Just please don't ask me why,
the good ones always die.
And in the sky,
the angels will take her to the light,
she will wake up in a better place to night

(Bridge, gradually getting louder)
And all we can do,
is wait outside her hospital room (x4)

(Chorus)
Momma please don't cry,
everything will be alright.
Just please don't ask me why,
the good ones always die.
And in the sky,
the angels will take her to the light,
she will wake up in a better place to night
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#2
This is really good. Just a few things i got a little confused over. During the chorus you say that the angels will take her and all that good stuff. In the bridge you say all we can do is wait outside her hospital room. I guess my question would be if she actually died? All in all though i liked this a lot, and yeah gaslight is a good band.