#1
About the same girl, who **** a brick at me for no reason, hope you enjoy

Spoken: When will we change, our ways of life, our ways to live, our way to solve conflict?

What the hell does that mean,
Randomly shouting and crying;
Calling me names;
Fake
Bastard
"I can see right through you"
'Not cool'
How could you say that?
It's the sharp, hot knife,
through the coldest butter,
And the coldest skin.
Straight to the nerves
Right through the flesh,
Forever the mark* will stay, (*originally scars or wound,what sounds better?)
Now the damage is done.
The needle has gone through the thread;
The bomb has been dropped,
The Guns have been made,
The troops have prepared;
The 7/11 has been robbed,
There is no going back, none of the
"I'm sorry"
"I wasn't thinking right" or the
"It was a rough day"
Don't tell me.
Just accept it,

You're really starting to hate me now.


comments, questions, ideas, suggestions are appreciated
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
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Last edited by nowa90 at Mar 23, 2009,
#3
personally i liek scars best for the end.

pretty good man.
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#4
@ stewieSwan: mark sounds best where?

@ wackamsta: Scars sound best where?

thanks guys...

anymore Crits?
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#5
Quote by nowa90
@ stewieSwan: mark sounds best where?

@ wackamsta: Scars sound best where?

thanks guys...

anymore Crits?



'the end' implies we meant at the end before you edited in the rest
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#6
ahah, okey then

any more crits please?
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
Taking an Internet break for a while, will come on when I can.