#1
I think it's a good work
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Last edited by Simon Blackwing at Mar 23, 2009,
#2
The church organs make this so kvlt and troo.

Actually, its pretty good. I see the Death in it. Overall, your riffs are good. I didn't like the A# tremolo/pedal point riff though with the power chords. It seemed a little uninspired and just out of place.

The solo was great and all your leads/licks are tasty.
The rhythm section is strong too. I especially like the drums.
#3
I really loved the organs at the start but I think the intro overall is a bit too repetitive? Change up the riff the guitar uses so it doesn't match the organs, but stays in key relative to the organ.

I found the transition to bar 73 kind of rough as well, could use some rang out keystrokes to link the two together?

"Riff 2", you should make some more melodic choices for the notes you use in your tremolo picking. I think it's too chromatic even considering the style of genre you play.

You should also re introduce the organ somewhere else in the song, it was sad how you just let that concept slide out the window while coming up with the rest of the song.

Hope you leave me some feedback as well!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1093469