#2
haha that was incredible, Made my day, or at least filled my need for sadness according to the surgeon general.
Good vox
good guitar melody, Twas a little repetative, but thats fine
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#3
Your singing qualitities can use some improvements some times. Most of the time it`s good but it has it`s doubts. The lyrics are strange, but if you don`t take them literally they have areally powerful idea. But the chords are really nice. Though it can use some varations.
The part from 3:00-3:08 is brilliant. Especially the contrast between loud and soft. But you might change the outro a bit. Dind`t really liked that part...

But it`s the saddest song i`ve heard today. Beats Map of the Problematique by Muse, because that`s depressive and your one is sad...
#4
Awesome...but am I a bad person if that made me chuckle? I was impressed with the singing too
#5
haha no you can chuckle all you want. it was done for laughs, anyways. maximuse, it has it's doubts? that's cool I know it's not all perfect since I improvised the melody but more specific please? what would make a better outro? thanks for the comments!
#6
It's a nice song, and you voice suits it very well. If you developed some vibrato in your singing, it would be a perfect radio friendly song.
#7
I have vibrato, I'm a trained singer... but I chose not to use it. you really think I should? I can try it
#8
Quote by BillyGates
I have vibrato, I'm a trained singer... but I chose not to use it. you really think I should? I can try it


I think you should, at least on the chorus part, just to give the song a smoother edge
#9
I love it. Seriously, the guitar part was so pretty and your voice is perfect for it. I seriously wish I had your talent right about now, dude.