#1
Hey guys,

Me and my band are working on a new song. It`s in my profile and called My Last Love Song, you can also check out the lyrics.

The order is:
Chorus (as an intro)
Interlude (as an intro)
Verse
Chorus
Interlude
Verse
Chorus
Break
Interlude
Interlude

The last time we do the interlude as chorus. (So the lyrics are sang over the 'interlude')

Critics or comments are welcome. C4C!

But the other guitarist of my band thought the we should change the interlude because it get`s too much the same. Though the chord-progressions are different. It`s more or less the same idea.

Tips or thoughts?
Last edited by MaXiMuse at Mar 24, 2009,
#2
Great arrangement and chord progressions and melodies, I really like it. the only thing that I didn't enjoy was the tone of the keybord or whatever that was. Kinda sounded like those bad midi covers of songs heh... I like the melody it is playing I just don't like that sound or instrument or whatever. Over all tho 5* work.

Some feedback on my new band would be appreciated...
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1093018