Ya this the first song I really feel comfortable recording that I have written. As it is my first one I would appreciate as much feedback as possible. Its only about 2 mins, I have only recorded it up to the first chorus, still writing the solo and ending verses.

Thanks so much

Mix between Metal/Hard Rock/Swing/Jazz = WIN

Bass and Guitars are played by me and I used a drum machine.

(First one)

Sheet Music
http://www.mediafire.com/file/kzngwmwmimj/~Alice~ Sheet Music.gp5
Last edited by Rodex89 at Mar 24, 2009,
Very good mix.You do that yourself?

The song itself is pretty cool so far.Don't hear much like that on UG.I would listen to your music.It has a very fun quality to it.I don't know what else to say...I like it.It is well presented.Just finish it.
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Ya I mixed it using Mixraft 4 and Guitar Rig 3, im a little control freak so I tweak it the sound all the time.

Glad you liked it, thats all I can hope for haha.
Yep I used Guitar Rig 3. These were the tones (slightly modified)

Solos = Ultra Gain Lead
Lead Guitar = Pete cant explain (HB Bridge)
Rhythm = Foo Monkeys (HB Bridge) - This is the tone you were wondering about?
Quite great, the drums I'm not too sure about. They fit the song but seemed a bit bland, but other than that it was superb. I don't have anything up to crit so no C4C
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Haha I guess thats a good thing Quam. Ya I mean Im not a drums expert, but they work. Obviously when I record with a drummer, the song will have a lot more personality.