#1
Just a little ditty I threw together last night, not sure if Its something I'm going to try to finish or not yet but a little input on it would be nice.

v1
She paints her nails
Naive to the world
Completely unaware
Of how life isn't fair
She puts on a smile
A nonchalant denial

v2
She watches TV
And still can't see clearly
All the problems we have
She thinks its not that bad
But deep down she knows
How hard life really blows

chorus
And the harder that she tries
The harder it becomes
And the more she tries to hide
The harder it is to smile
Call me Dom
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#2
Its alright. Ok.

just take out "How hard life really blows"

replace it with something else it just has to go.
#3
first verse is pretty cool. reminds me of the those rich bitches that go to Canada, Mexico, and Florida all the same week during spring break lol
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#5
people come to Canada for breaks? :S:
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#7
FYI it is a punk song if that makes a difference at all
Call me Dom
Quote by Dmaj7
I don't know how to count canadians, the metric system is hard

Quote by gregs1020
well if lbj pokes his head in here and there's no nuts shit's gonna go doooooooowwwwwwwwwn.



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