Hey UG

Me and my friends were composing something to play together... and we got a nice lil prelude to doom....its more centered to a violin song than a guitar, but that lil guitar pieces i think they dont sound quite right... what do you think of the lead guitar of this song...

Any help or critic appreciated, c4c btw
Last edited by Knuxus at Mar 25, 2009,
some bits are nice but others are really dont fit maybe find a scale and use that to help or just play around until you find it

im not a fan of doom metal so i wouldent really be able 2 help sorry

everything sounded good except the lead at some points!