Ok, so this is an unfinished song, but I'd like to hear some comments about it. It's designed to be a follow up for Mirages (see my sig), so it somewhat follows the desert theme there. It's like Alexander the Great... rushing to neighbour nations and conquering them.

EDIT: Hmm, the transition to Verse 1 needs something else there. It's too straight forward.
Last edited by January85 at Mar 26, 2009,
I think it was good. The riffs and the solo were made with good taste, nothing too fancy. And it had a little humppa in it
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