#1
My friend asked me too write a happy song for her birthday, since she couldn't make up her mind what she wanted... so I wrote a love song for her based on my feelings for some guy I used to like. I performed it publicly and everyone laughed there ass off.


Stranger than fiction
Music & Lyrics: Valerie Kay Marlin


I always thought the world have been a better place
If you’d just hold my hand
Would have been everything you’d want me to be
If you’d just be my man

I know I messed up and these things are hard to fix
But loving you is an art
falling for you was never a bad thing
But you sure did break my heart, only because

CHORUS
I want you, cause’ I need you
You’re the picture in my mind
when the sunlight goes away
Cause I love you, cause’ I’ll please you
You’re my aching contradiction
A love that’s stranger than fiction

You’re the only thing I’m certain of when I’m not sure of anything
You’re the best decision I’ve made
I’m only home when my face is against your neck
And your breathe is telling me, please don’t stop

{Repeat Chorus}

BRIGDE
Hey Your all I need and more
The catapult that makes me soar
You’re the inspiration of my soul
one day you’ll realize
I’m what your looking for
till then I’ll be waiting at your door

{Repeat chorus}

I would explain to you if I could
Why this love always stayed
When I thought it’d fade away
In the end I hope it’s you
Then together we’ll made two
Crazy SOB’s

I was going to make you a papier-mâché head
But I wrote this stupid love song instead
I hope that this year is ****ing awesome
You’re a good friend and you don’t deserve nothing less


V= D,A,E,A
C=D,A,G,E
B=D,Bm,E,A
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#3
You have a comment now =) I don't really know what to say about the song except the title is going to make Five Finger Death Punch fans come running to see if you are copying their "Stranger Than Fiction" =P
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#4
It's a pretty kewl love song. I think the rhyming was great, and you did well with this!

I'd love to see more stuff from you

Check out my song Sunshine if you'd like
please... lol.
#5
Quote by stealer42
You have a comment now =) I don't really know what to say about the song except the title is going to make Five Finger Death Punch fans come running to see if you are copying their "Stranger Than Fiction" =P

Haha guilty of that. I was like "what?"


Overall the I thought the song was a sweet love song. The flow is kind of off, for me, but it probably works out alright in the end =]
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#7
Quote by hippiepeace27
Haha , the song is sappy, but it's supposed to be?

I absolutely love the chorus though. !


Haha, Yeah the whole point was to make my friend really uncomfortable.
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#8
I thinks it's too soppy.. and the use of 'my man' is pretty cringey..

though if it was to make your friend feel uncomfortable I'm sure it was a right laugh