#1
Ive never wote a song before so this is my first attempt, sick of my bands silly filler lyrics.

Please dont comment on the content as i know some will disagree just the structure please.

we have to remove the asbestos
itll be another billion in costs
surely insurance would cover
if we could apportion blame on another

7 billion is a nice figure
blind the masses through the media
Oh but wont it be a shame?
for the ones who gain the blame

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath

The PNAC they were ripe
To dominate wherever theyd like
They couldnt wait any longeer
the cure, a suicide bomber

The reason for their bases
Were now set in their places
it was now the time to invade
Heartless people dont feel ashamed

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath

Chaneys now having a ball
With all of his new found oil
Make sure to suck it all up
Convert it all to profit

Hes glad he was once the CEO
cause it still has profits you know,
His multi0annual installemtns of money
mixed with power arnt even funny

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath

Also gaining was the illiterate leader
Receving payments for extra defence
This of course was not used in current conflicts
Rather defence of the idiots political movements

the 60 per cent
too much to not have control of
economic slowdown was not going to occur
black gold was needed so they went and got more

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath

The worthwhile opportunity cost
was 3000 dearly departed
but they didnt care
Those peoples live they decided to spare

They didnt join the fear and the mourning
it was a great tuesday morning
.... a great tuesday morning
..... a great tuesday morning

BREAK

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath

ohhh blow it on down
straight to the ground
ohhhh pump out the lies
Calm the sheeps minds
ohhhh cover the death
with false leading breath
#2
You seemed to force alot of the rhyming in there ,but the chorus piece is pretty memorable ;some of the verses were pretty word-y for my tastes but that's just me =) overall : good job my friend :]
Remember, this too will pass.

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#3
Wow. Insurance fraud song.
Title is too much like Alter Bridge. Change it to Insurance Fraud.
On topic, I don't really like it much.
Last line of first verse, bad.
And for hating filler lyrics, you use a lot of them... just saying.
"Blow it on down, straight to the ground." Can't get more generic filler than that.
And why make a song about insurance fraud/politics like this? Weird...
#4
Quote by mamosa
Wow. Insurance fraud song.
Title is too much like Alter Bridge. Change it to Insurance Fraud.
On topic, I don't really like it much.
Last line of first verse, bad.
And for hating filler lyrics, you use a lot of them... just saying.
"Blow it on down, straight to the ground." Can't get more generic filler than that.
And why make a song about insurance fraud/politics like this? Weird...


this guy is dead-on.
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