Not bad, I like the verses. Get some distortion in the chorus or whatever it is.
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I think it's a pretty good song. While the vocals are slightly monotone, I think it works quite well with what you are singing. The only thing I can see wrong is that the guitar during the chorus seems a little hokey sounding.
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aay how old r u and r u guy or a girl i cant tell great song though try projecting ya voice