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Piece By Piece

I saw you yesterday
You said you were okay
But that was yesterday
And now i must say

I think your sad because your crying
No sorry that was me
I happened to be watching
Reality MTV

Guys in tight pants
Girls that look like *****s
Sorry but I
Just expected more

Pirates will never take you down
I'll never let them take you down
Unless they all take you down
Piece by piece

I listen to you
Didn't sound as bright as before
So I stand here
A defender of the faith and more

They'll shove it down your throats
So you better eat it well
And most of the time you do
But thats the purpose of the spell

Please let me save you
They have you in a cage
Just look at the menu
There's stuff on the second page

Pirates will never take you down
I'll never let them take you down
Unless they all take you down
Piece by piece

Now that they are
Robbing everyone over pennys
Just like all can stand as one
all can fall as many

This is my first post in the forum, I read the rules but if I missed something sorry. I dug this out from my vault of lyrics today I thought I'd post it here to get some feedback. I think I wrote this about the Mainstream Music scene and the whole pirating music fad that still makes me mad.
#2
Quote by TheWEBBY

Please let me save you
They have you in a cage
Just look at the menu
There's stuff on the second page


Lol i love that verse.

But its pretty good. The topic is def original. I'd fix the first verse a little i think. Maybe its just me. Other than that its nice.
"I'll bite into your face just to be close to your eyes"