good song, creates a mood, and shows your style...
The first minute or so, the everlasting crash cymbal gets extremely annoying, try solving that, but for the rest the mix is good, the tone on the rythm guitar could be better, try eq'ing a bit, it's a bit too dark, you can't hear the played notes clear enough...
TBH, the music isn't my style, but this has pleased me a bit, it's pretty good, but the rythm guitar and drums annoyed me... Breaks of lead guitar and the background keyboard are very good, keep up the good work!
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