#1
Killing me
And I wish that you could see
The madness is growing strong
I’ve been here all along

I believed you
When you said you loved me too
Now where are you?
Now where are you?

And you’re the one who said that true love waits
And you’re the one who always believed in fate
But I’m the one who’s been here all along
Waiting…

Kissing me
And I wish that it could be
I know that there’s something wrong
And yet I’ve been here all along

And you’re the one who said that true love waits
And you’re the one who always believed in fate
But I’m the one who’s been here all along
Waiting…

Missing me
I know that you would be
If I were to say so long
‘cuz I’ve been here all along

And you’re the one who said that true love waits
And you’re the one who always believed in fate
But I’m the one who’s been here all along
Waiting

Kill me
Kiss me
Miss me

Kill me
Kiss me
Miss me

And you’re the one who said that true love waits
And you’re the one who always believed in fate
But I’m the one who’s been here all along
Waiting…


crit4crit
#4
I like a lot of things about this piece. The 1st verse, the chorus, and what i'm guessing to be the bridge- "kill me, kiss me, miss me" are my favorite parts. I didn't like how you used the word "along" the amount of times you did but it's okay. It works, just that it got a little too repetitive. Other than that, pretty good! C4C-last link in my sig. would be great! Thanks