Another song out by ME D:

tryin to get noticed

i've been told my stuff ain't half bad so let me know what you think

not yet decided..gp5
Last edited by Mr.Seven at Jun 28, 2009,
Criting as I listen.

I don't really dig the intro riff, I'm not a fan of these angular, chromatic things. Also, repeated way to many times.
Drum fill after the intro is nice though.
I don't really dig the second riff either (mainly because I'm not a fan of power chord riffs), the variation on it that comes afterwards is nice though.
The last riff have potential, but seriously, is it supposed to be 5 bars/in 5/4? I like the first two bars, but then it's kinda meh.

Work on it, rite?
I have to agree with GustavLW about the intro.

It's hard to tell what you "want" with the song after the part that begins at bar 18, but IMO you need a new riff :P And new drums, it doesn't feel like the song ever "begins".

This song could get much better with some more/new riffs, and better drums. Where is the snare?

It's a bit repetitive (as my post also is lol). The last riff would be cooler with better drums!

Would you like to comment mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1153382