#2
paper wings, reference to rise against there?
"I will endure, hide away...

I would outrun the scythe, glaring with failure"


Opeth - April Ethereal
#4
Vredesbyrd23 - yeah, it's kind of a Rise Against reference. I'm currently working on coming up with another story that has deep socio-political meaning and connotations. lol. Rise Against rocks!

Ledzephed - ahh yes, if I had the money, I would totally take voice lessons. For now I just write it off as part of my D.I.Y. attitude.
#5
the tone of your voice kinda reminds me of incubus. but ill be frank, you have trouble singing in key. but the guitar playin is spot on man.
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#7
Okay, so I decided to record the guitar and vocals together to see if maybe that was the problem. I'm not exactly an impartial third party here, so i would really like to know if i succeeded in solving the singing issues.

so go to www.myspace.com/paperwingsacoustic and look at the songs titled "That's Alright, it's Okay," "Break a Leg," and "Something to do When You're Bored." and tell me if i'm on key!