#2
really chill man, loved the effects, made me think of sitting by a lake or something, very trippy and cool. also, idk if it was my speakers but the bass seemed to overpower a little. but seemed very meaningful with the pictures, you can feel the emotion in the music, great job

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#3
Quote by Ardie12
really chill man, loved the effects, made me think of sitting by a lake or something, very trippy and cool. also, idk if it was my speakers but the bass seemed to overpower a little. but seemed very meaningful with the pictures, you can feel the emotion in the music, great job

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1151119

thank you.

i'm happy that you could feel emotion trough my music.

i'll check out your song
#4
What a lovely soft track.

I love the delay effect near the 1:50 point.

I dont know if you put in the off key notes on purpose but they pull you out of the mellowness and make you think which I like.

The thin sounding guitar at the end thats on the verge of breaking up fitted perfectly.

If you would be so kind;
My Track
#6
Quote by Preid
What a lovely soft track.

I love the delay effect near the 1:50 point.

I dont know if you put in the off key notes on purpose but they pull you out of the mellowness and make you think which I like.

The thin sounding guitar at the end thats on the verge of breaking up fitted perfectly.

If you would be so kind;
My Track

thank you.
yes i thought long about the effects to use ^^

the wrong notes aren't on purpose.
i actually improvised all the parts, except for the rythm guitar.
i tried to play over the off key notes, but some parts sound good , even if they are out of key ^^.

yes i like the end 2 :p
thank you!

i'll check your song
#7
Quote by jagermeister420
that was good dude...very slow and smooth....keep up the good work

thank you
#8
starts out really nice, the acoustic guitar could use just a tad more treble in my opinion,
really like the delayed guitar that starts at 00:39, nice touch!
the guitar that comes in at 01:20 i dont like that much, sounds a bit off in 2 or 3 places
nice tones, the final lead could use just a tad more bass in my opinion
but overall, Really nice, felt Eerie (sp?) and light, but also heavy if you get what I mean with that!
I hope that helped a bit!
2 thumbs up!

Check out mine?
#9
Quote by Freth
starts out really nice, the acoustic guitar could use just a tad more treble in my opinion,
really like the delayed guitar that starts at 00:39, nice touch!
the guitar that comes in at 01:20 i dont like that much, sounds a bit off in 2 or 3 places
nice tones, the final lead could use just a tad more bass in my opinion
but overall, Really nice, felt Eerie (sp?) and light, but also heavy if you get what I mean with that!
I hope that helped a bit!
2 thumbs up!

Check out mine?

thank you. it's not an acoustic guitar you hear, it's my electric modified with my digitech pedal.

yes, i know i was off in some places, but the lead is all improvised and I wasn't so sure about the key ^^.

thx

i'll check yours out
#10
ik zien het nu pas da ge nen belg zijt!
dan haddeket evengoe int nederlands kunnen doen
#11
Quote by Freth
ik zien het nu pas da ge nen belg zijt!
dan haddeket evengoe int nederlands kunnen doen

hehe :p fail :p
xD
#12
Like a couple of the others I didnt really like the lead guitar at some points because the notes are off. you got away with a couple of them but a few of the others were too noticeably a mistake. Other than that though it was a really cool soft track. Maybe plan out what your gunna play and touch it up a bit. good job
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