lots of killswitch engage influence here, i wrote it today in a very short space of time and i think its okay. C4C of course
Last edited by frankibo at Jun 29, 2009,
The intro is very generic and has been used in a LOT of other songs, sorry.

Verse 1 is better, but maybe you could change the rhythm of it a bit?

I didn't like the pre-chorus very much.

The Chorus is really cool! And the postchorus works well.

The breakdown was OK but the bridge was nicely done.

I think you need a longer outro!

Nice work with the drums.

I won't grade you on a scale from one to ten as it is impossible to grade music that way.

my song: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1153382