Hey man, I can't comment (yet) because you are going to need to set your account to public. It won't let anyone view songs (or anything else) on your profile at the moment cause it is on private. Just letting you know!
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I enjoyed listening to this song - it was pretty mellow and easy-going which was cool. The clean guitar sounded really nice and the riffs/chords that you play are really catchy. The lead guitar fitted the song perfectly and you've got some really nice blues licks going on. I think that some of the bends were a bit off though so that could be something to fix. Overall I think it's a great song and you're a great writer/player.

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