There both covers so check em out and I'll check out and crit your stuff.

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Loved the tone of the guitars. The singers voice was really good too, strong and in pitch. However, i wasnt feeling the 2nd guitar, since it didnt do THAT much too really add to the song. Maybe arrange some more noticable lead parts to go over it?

Overall, its a great bar act. Try writing some originals, and try to move beyond that. You got a great voice (if you're the one singing).

crit for crit: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1147631
the singer is pretty good, although i thought the vocals were too "affected" and over the top emotionally, but i think that's just based on my preference. i agree with One on Sunday about the 2nd guitar, but the two covers aren't really good songs to base it on since there aren't a lot of leads built into them. definitely think you should try to write some original stuff. keep it up!!