CheesyMozarella
Slacker
Join date: May 2009
1,015 IQ
#1
Well, yeah, it's just an intro, alot of work remains.

Just tell me what you think.

Is it worth working on?
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Song.zip
Last edited by CheesyMozarella at Jun 30, 2009,
firetothemax
The Brobocop
Join date: Jan 2007
26 IQ
#2
Yes. Keep it up, but be wary of falling into cliché.
ultimate-guitar is for idiots.
Progbass92
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2008
1,295 IQ
#3
I think the drums could use some improvements. They sound too much like they belong in a metalcore song instead of a prog song. I think the progression is really generic and could use some switching up in the first four measures too. Throw in some accidentals and make it more interesting. Keep it up though. I think it'll be great.
Good luck.
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.starrk
Troglodyte
Join date: Apr 2006
149 IQ
#4
That sounded very... metalcore to me. While it did have an odd rhythm, that's about where the progressive part stopped. You are definitely trying, so keep on working on it. But at the moment, you have a fairly generic intro.

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