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Sorry to the moderators about my original post. Anyways, this is my first song. I have music to it but i havent recorded anything. Hopefully that will happen after i get a few songs together. This song is about my dad. He passed away from cancer last week. I havent been sleeping much so I end up playing guitar all night. Let me know what you think. Ive put alot of work into it but am still not fully satisfied. Ide love to critique some songs as well so give me a link.

1st Verse

We find ourselves
Trapped in this game
Floating spirits
Never the same

So we stand
Upon this ground
Lost in time
Our bodies never found

Chorus

It's 4 O'Clock again
Just another sleepless night
Dont always know whats wrong or right
So I strum my guitar into the night

Now only dreams keep you and I apart
You were there for me right from the start
And I dont know what to do
So I lie awake and think of you

2nd Verse

Falling through life
We niver win
Fall in line
Live free from sin

So we walk
This road again
Hapiness is found
Just around the bend

Chorus

It's 4 O'Clock again
Just another sleepless night
Dont always know whats wrong or right
So I strum my guitar into the night

Now only dreams keep you and I apart
You were there for me right from the start
And I dont know what to do
So I lie awake and think of you