psyo
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2009
345 IQ
#2
intro riff 1-2 was cool, couldve lead into a very dissonant song or either way.

4-6 just for me it seemed a bit awkward and repetitive. I don't like that it goes in 3/4 for that one bar, it'd definately sound better with those mad grind vocals. But from a pure guitar perspective its a bit boring (it reminded me of a circus haha)

7-8 was cool aswell, but yeah very short, id probably throw maybe one or two variations of that in somewhere.
9-10 also much the same as 7-8, it couldve gone on a few bars longer. THe 6/4 bar was good.
11-14 is catchy with the bass + drums while the guitar doesnt play. I liked it.
15-30 also very catchy and it'd have a crowd going. Maybe throw in a diminished fifth instead of just a fourth on those higher notes.
33-35 back to that riff I didnt like hehe
36-38 kick ass ending.

So basically id say elaborate on the more grindy type riffs so they are just a little longer. Even though those riffs together are probably about the same length as the syncopated section, it seems like they are shorter and it feels a bit uneven. Find a better main riff and stretch it out a little. 15-30 was really memorable, good work.
keganonthedunes
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Join date: Oct 2008
287 IQ
#3
i liked it. it was like old grindcore but with elements of mathcore, like the odd timing. cool stuff
herman ri2
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Join date: Jun 2008
1,615 IQ
#4
tbh, I think that the name of the song is very unnecessary and disguising.
turtlewax
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Join date: Feb 2008
1,791 IQ
#6
Dead storage? When is that mentioned in Pulp Fiction...oh right...The dead.... storage area?
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turtlewax
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Join date: Feb 2008
1,791 IQ
#8
yeah I know...I don't think its an appropiate title though, its just offensive to people who might not have seen the film "dead storage" is good though
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ExplorerFreak
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Join date: Aug 2006
1,052 IQ
#9
People. It is grindcore. I think complaining about "appropriate" is a bit counter-productive to the genre's purpose and motives.