#1
I recorded this with my Takamine G series through a USB mic into a basic computer sound recorded. I'm wondering what people think of it, is it not jazzy enough, would you consider it jazz, what does it need? Thanks for any replies

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#2
nice rythem man. i liked the chords. the recording sounds great. it needs vocals though, i was waiting for them at 37 seconds and dident get them. a great track otherwise. it dident sounds real jazzy to me. more acoustic rock sounding. it reminded me of a dave matthews song. nice job. with some cool lyrics this could be a great great song. keep it up.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20552414#post20552414