#2
Quote by ep440


sounds sweet, great lead tone, nice licks. maybe need to be slightly more melodic and less trying to just pull out all the great licks in one go. I thought i was listening to Holy Wars at one point! Some of the backing chords were not great maybe change up to some sus chords or 9ths. It would sound great with solid double bass drumming.

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#3
They are amazing!. I honestly cannot find fault with any of it. Vastly supreme to myself and pretty much everything I have heard on this site.