JackBowen
Early Guitarist
Join date: Oct 2008
221 IQ
#1
Ive been playing guitar for a year now and this is one of my first songs ive wrote for my currently three man band. Its going well but i really need some feedback and advice, especially on the theory side of things which im lacking.

Hope you enjoy it, thanks!
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twasbrilling
diddly diddly do
Join date: Jun 2008
67 IQ
#2
you spelt name wrong
it's alrite but guitar pro will never do a song justice

use a recording program next time
Kevy Absolution
Going to Neverender in KC
Join date: Nov 2008
1,669 IQ
#3
Quote by twasbrilling
you spelt name wrong
it's alrite but guitar pro will never do a song justice

use a recording program next time


Well that was a dumbass thing to say. Not everyone can blow money or feels like putting effort in to record live stuff.

I think it's a cool song. I think in some parts you should cut down on the octave usage because it's going to sound a bit too open I think but I like the chords and the way they are interplayed.
breaking hearts
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breaking guitars
twasbrilling
diddly diddly do
Join date: Jun 2008
67 IQ
#4
you can download plenty of free recording programs then all you need is a reducer which costs about 50cent
`NeXxuS`
The Moor
Join date: Jul 2002
416 IQ
#6
soUNds good but its not finished. the solo should be more dynamic
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JackBowen
Early Guitarist
Join date: Oct 2008
221 IQ
#7
thanks for the good comments!
i have tried recording simply with a cable from my amp to audacity, but obviously it came out poorly, and sounded terrible with distortion. So i guess i will have to spend some money if i want to record.

i know i octaved a lot, too much infact, but what do you mean by open?
and yes it is still not finished, im not great with making solos. Does anyone have any ideas on scales to use for this song in perticular? I have experimented with the basic minor scale, and it dosnt work too bad.