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its a poem, i usually write a bunch of poems and then take bits and pieces from the poems and form them into lyrics, so it sounds choppy and distant because that's how i like it, C4C thanks

hands full of pieces; pieces of smiles
mirrors full of shards, held together for miles
our hands wont fit; so break them we will
help me to help you; so dysfunctional
we'll cut each other apart; and paste us back together
if not for the pieces, we'd be stuck in bad weather
a hand to the mirror and a mirror to the mouth
help me to help you smile at yourself
Quote by herby190
When I saw that, I thought of musical notes.... my elementary school teachers taught them as "tee-tees" "ta-tas" and a bunch of other nonsense....
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It is different than a lot of other poems I have read, but put to the right music it could sound really good
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