It's pretty good so far. The 6/4 riff was well executed and flowed well. My only suggestion is that you take the octaves off the bass part during the 5/4 riff. It's not like they sounded bad, but it's not really possible to play effectively. The E string just gets in the way. Keep it up though. Good work.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1155297